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In reply to @sdv.eth
9/23/2024

- echoing other feedback from dawufi and others, the last paragraph has the best bang for buck and makes a good template for your previous experience - one way to restructure your paragraphs could be: brief intro, accomplishments, then conclude with the fit you’re looking for - a super simple one page website with this text as the primary content could be good to have open publicly, while flexing a little frontend muscle Overall your experience and skill set is rock solid, narrative just needs to be a little clearer, and wherever you land will be very lucky to have you. Good luck Zinger! 2/2

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